tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5387667238687975467.post3311420046542037906..comments2024-03-26T14:40:52.346+00:00Comments on magpie bridge: LOW SKY, LAZY WINDPaul Tobinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14732771806819029077noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5387667238687975467.post-27897778786439345632019-06-20T16:55:21.910+01:002019-06-20T16:55:21.910+01:00Thanks Oscar
I value your opinion greatly.
I tho...Thanks Oscar <br />I value your opinion greatly. <br />I thought the poem needed to be simple and direct, otherwise it would be tell and not show. <br />Are you still writing? We must meet up and talk xxPaul Tobinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14732771806819029077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5387667238687975467.post-29300313564347138252019-06-20T11:01:51.302+01:002019-06-20T11:01:51.302+01:00Not actually a simple poem....Love it, particularl...Not actually a simple poem....Love it, particularly the awkwardness of the last line..."that we had put on before" like the sorrow held back, like somehow going back to an earlier time of linear simplicity. Always a great fan Paul. Oscar xEmma Calinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02661631701340292529noreply@blogger.com