Friday, 30 May 2025

WHO WOULD COURT MISFORTUNE?

Some poems are based on real life, some are not. This is one of those. Not sure about the ending.

ELEPHANT ORNAMENTS


My father would have none of it

china elephants holiday gifts

they always bring bad luck

and who would court misfortune?


There were moments when a child

that I sensed elephants in the living room

the drum taut tension of things unsaid

I knew not to ask

I had an interesting discussion with a friend about last post's poem and was prompted to make a number of changes.

For Euan and Murray


I am carrying you

into your dreams


This is

my walking spell


the same circuit

of forty two steps


Again and again

around this room


And as we move

all I ask of you


Is to close

those tired eyes


Then you

will cross the border


Don’t worry

the whole wide world


Will still be here

when you awaken

What do you think? Does it work better? I think so. Thanks Nel.

Here are Everything But The Girl.

Until next time.

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