The idea for this post's poem came from a Ray Bradbury short story, Kaleidoscope.
It is about a group of astronauts falling towards a planet following the destruction of their spacecraft.
It is always worthwhile playing about with shape and spacing as well as stanza length.
I leave you with Anna Ternheim.
It is about a group of astronauts falling towards a planet following the destruction of their spacecraft.
Poem
[with
thanks to Ray Bradbury for Kaleidoscope]
tumbling
to
the point
where
it is the world
that
appears to turn
take
in the textures
I
threshold
from
the knitted black of space
ionospheric
I
fall
storms
await me
Layout is everything for certain poems. I wrote this one in a workshop and originally it was squeezed into about seven lines. By altering the spacing I think I have let the poem breathe. It is always worthwhile playing about with shape and spacing as well as stanza length.
I leave you with Anna Ternheim.
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