Today's poem arose from a writing exercise.
I took a blank piece of paper and wrote whatever words came into my head until I had filled it. No stopping, no thinking about the contents and no criticism. I just wrote.
Then I read it and wondered if there was a poem lurking in there.
This came slowly out.
I got the idea of mechanical birds to jewel the skies and the propellers from the writing, the rest evolved over a couple of weeks and many revisions.
Here's The Mamas and Papas.
Until next time.
I took a blank piece of paper and wrote whatever words came into my head until I had filled it. No stopping, no thinking about the contents and no criticism. I just wrote.
Then I read it and wondered if there was a poem lurking in there.
This came slowly out.
the silence of the great extinction
settled
on the shoulders of the survivors
stalling
all thoughts of celebration
as
if for the first time
they
clearly saw all that had been lost
as
if for the first time
so
set to work
shipping
in from beyond the stars
mechanical
birds to jewel their skies
and
fill a niche long vacated
by
sinew and bone
feather
and wing
see
how their propellers idle
as
the thermal spirals then ever higher
to
spectrograph heaven with their metal tongues
I got the idea of mechanical birds to jewel the skies and the propellers from the writing, the rest evolved over a couple of weeks and many revisions.
Here's The Mamas and Papas.
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