I participated in a writing workshop last week. The focus was on the fantastic, exaggeration, amplifying beyond belief. it was fun. I managed to write two poems [neither of them a tall a tale].
I like walking barefoot on the beach
even though the sky is always out of reach
the seals stay in the blue green below
and never whisper what they know
as the tide gives then takes away
the transient land on which you cannot stay
This was just a piece of whimsy. One of the other participants had told me they liked walking on the beach and it became six lines of fantasy. This second poem arose from another exercise. I had to write about a person talking to their reflection in a mirror.
PERFECT IMPERFECTION
there is comfort in the chipped cup
on its mismatched saucer
and in the teapot’s wonky spout
that will never ever pour proper
embrace the world for what it is
near enough can be good enough
I was thinking that the person was too critical of themselves, trying to be too perfect and that led to my celebration of the imperfect. Much of the time near enough is more than adequate. Let's not give ourselves too hard a time.
Here's Natalie Merchant with Sister Tilly.
Until next time.
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