Friday, 25 July 2025

ON A SCREEN IN HER HEAD

I am a confirmed people watcher as you can tell from this poem.

YOU PLAY THE HAND YOU’RE GIVEN 1

Tallinn Old Town – Friday afternoon


What catches your attention

as you turn a corner

is the bossy woman with the camera

chivvying the others into shapes

she sees on a screen in her head


It’s only then you notice the Bride

in ivory silk with a bouquet to match

being told where to stand

where to look

who to smile at

and you wish her

against all the odds

a happy life

I haven't got much to say about it as I think it speaks for itself. I have however changed this next poem after discussing it with the Secret Poets. 

CHARADE


I almost bump into Carey Grant

In the toilet of a cinema in Warrington


His image is all over one of the walls

look at the enlarged whites of his eyes


He’s in such a pickle

frozen in black and white panic


Definitely flight or fight mode

who wouldn’t be


He’s being chased

by a crop dusting aeroplane


Stuck in the re-creation

of someone else’s nightmare


As if he didn’t have enough

of his own to be going on with

Just two small changes, one in the third stanza and another in the sixth. Three words have been removed. You can read the earlier version here.

Brooke Sharkey has just released a new single. Her new album is beautiful. 

Until next time.

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