This poem began as a stray thought. I was looking at the cacti in the utility when and image of a flowering cactus popped into my head from my schooldays. Eventually I fashioned it into this poem.
THOSE DAYS, THESE DAYS
Mr Farr on the bus from Penketh
briefcased as usual
all scuffed tan leather,
he’s on the top deck smoking
[as you did in those days]
with a cactus in a paper bag
he was a succulent man
prickly but fair he told all the school
That week he showed each class
the just about sprouting cactus flowers
and proudly informed us
this is the first time in seven years
and were we impressed
I cannot remember being very
but the event managed to lodge
somewhere inside my head
Over half a century later
for reasons I cannot explain
I have two cacti on a window ledge
that flower every six months
as regular as clockwork
I think they realise that the jig is up
and they’d better get on
with it while there’s still time
Most of it is taken from life. Mr Farr [who has appeared in another poem] did live in Penketh, and he was one of those people who enjoyed smoking cigarettes. Six foot plus tall, he used to say it was a good job smoking stunted your growth. We children would laugh at that. I think that this draft is not quite there. Watch this space.
Here's Calexico and Iron and Wine. I can't believe it's so long since they first recorded together.
Until next time.



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