Here is a poem that arose from the first line, it snaked around my skull for a week or so before gracing the page. At the moment that seems to be how I write, thoughts before ink so to speak. I used to write everything down immediately. I don't think one way is superior to the other, the main thing is to acknowledge the idea.
The second half of the poem came later and I am not sure that it is clear.
It took a couple of drafts to arrive at the layout. I think the spacing adds to the effect.
he swapped his wife for the radio
She just gets better and better,
Here's a house concert from earlier in the year.
Until next time.
The second half of the poem came later and I am not sure that it is clear.
It took a couple of drafts to arrive at the layout. I think the spacing adds to the effect.
he swapped his wife for the radio
by
acrimony not by choice
disillusion,
breakdown, loss
and
here he is in the night
twisting
in memory soaked sheets
balancing
sleeplessness against recrimination
the
pressure of the night compresses the World Service
dream
switch
to
a grandstand view
of
his hopes falling at the first hurdle
then
dead horse heavy
he
is trapped beneath
it
will take years to get free
I have just received the new cd by Brooke Sharkey and I am off to see her tonight in Totnes. It is truly excellent and I shall be reviewing it next week.She just gets better and better,