Friday 1 November 2024

THE DAWN WAS FRESH AND CLEAR

 A personal history poem first this post.

21st BIRTHDAY POEM


Colours erupted in the wet sky

the fireworks arrived on time

as we toasted my birthday

in malt and Moroccan


Time started to leapfrog

a series of stuttering memories

that I could later never quite sequence

but the dawn was fresh and clear


I walked home

leaving a set of footprints

on the dewed grass

that eventually led me here

This is something I've been looking at for a couple of weeks and please regard this as a first draft. I think it's pretty straight forward reportage. The events happened at a festival back in the 70s and it did conclude with fireworks.

I don't know where this one comes from. It wrote itself and I don't know what to make of it. 

Elvis said to Elvis in the Clones For Hire stockade:

I’d never have gone and done it

if I’d have even had half an inkling this would be my fate

I’d have sacked that bastard Colonel for a start


Marilyn Monroe sighed:

You always say this before they retune your head

but you never ever act on the impulse

or think about the situation we are all in now


She was called away to another job

she was the most popular of the Heritage Clones

The other Elvis sighed

and wished he’d stuck to driving trucks

It did make me smile though.

Iron and Wine were excellent. Here's a video of him live.

Until next time