I recently spent a very enjoyable weekend on a poetry retreat with The Secret Poets. We each led a workshop and out of one came this post's poems.
During said workshop we were asked to go out into the garden and write about what we found. These are my observations.
Here is a second observation.
During said workshop we were asked to go out into the garden and write about what we found. These are my observations.
The
Rosemary
Bought
and brought over here
to
enrich our palette,
this
epicurean migrant may have taken root,
but
is still so out of step with the seasons
that
these delicate blue flowers
colour
this January day.
The Romans brought thyme to the British Isles, I had to check that on line.Here is a second observation.
Every
tree in this orchard plays statues
winter
cannot entice a single leaf to show
this
is not their time, so they wait
stand
stock still until the first notes of spring.
This third brief note is perhaps the one most in need of work.
Guinea
fowl in sudden motion
lickterty
– split freedom
leaves
the hen coop behind
such
action carries a cost
the
cold fox's hungry eye
I was attempting to capture the dangers inherent in freedom. Not sure it does it.
However the idea of simply putting yourself in a different place and just looking is excellent practice. Sometimes we need to the stimulus of new surroundings.
Here is Melissa Laveaux. Enjoy
Until next time.
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