I'm just back from Lisbon.
I haven't visited the city for about eight years. You can look at the poem my previous visit provoked here.
Actually I jotted down a number of ideas but have only worked this into something like a presentable form.
What I did notice this time was the influx of tourists from cruise ships. You have the same phenomenon in Barcelona.
Here is another rough draft. I literally spoke this into my phone as I walked to the supermarket today.
Watch this space for updates.
By the way I am posting every two weeks at the moment.
I leave you with Brooke Sharkey. I saw her again a couple of weeks ago and she was stunning.
Here is Bottletop Blues.
And here she is singing Your Tomorrow.
Until next time.
I haven't visited the city for about eight years. You can look at the poem my previous visit provoked here.
Actually I jotted down a number of ideas but have only worked this into something like a presentable form.
Lisbon:
16.4.17
she
shades her head
with
the poly-pocketed
piece
of paper
that
proclaims her
tour
guide status
the
human
crocodile
pauses
turns
on
her
cue
to
take
in
the
view
and
with
a
collective
sigh
resumes
its progress
up
the steep street
It's good practice to try and capture a scene quickly. You can work on the form later. Initially you simply want to get down those first impressions.What I did notice this time was the influx of tourists from cruise ships. You have the same phenomenon in Barcelona.
Here is another rough draft. I literally spoke this into my phone as I walked to the supermarket today.
this
time around he is a mechanic
who
cannot fix cars
and
spends his days changing units
as
directed by the diagnostic computer
he
has always worked with his hands
made
the best bows in his tribe
back
on the wind scoured step
was
twice a watchmaker in France
he
has scraped a making table optically flat
metal
speaks to him
steel
iron bronze
flint
and stone as well
now
he does as he is told
his
eternal self wonders
if
this is the lesson of this life
I am not sure I have got an impression of the depth of reincarnation.Watch this space for updates.
By the way I am posting every two weeks at the moment.
I leave you with Brooke Sharkey. I saw her again a couple of weeks ago and she was stunning.
Here is Bottletop Blues.
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