REINCARNATION BLUES

There's a lot to be said for sharing your work with others because they will not be as familiar with it as you are and will see the flaws. This revised poem benefitted from being discussed with friends. Thank you Secrets. You can read the pervious version here. 

REINCARNATION BLUES

It was lucky that we had the gramophone,

separated as we were by time,

and you could leave me messages

in the canyon spirals of shellac discs,

cunningly wrought as they were from insect resin.

Eventually I happened upon them

in fire sales of bankrupt stock.

Then with a growing fascination,

in the backrooms of second hand shops

that litter the fading ports this side of the warming sea.

You described your love for me

in the words of Tin Pan Alley tunes,

spry three minute miniatures that chronicle

the moves of smiling men who could never be me,

and the heartbreak from their treachery.

You see I arrived too late though not by choice.

You had jumped impulsively from the Bardo

as the drop zone came into sight.

I hesitated. Too late I followed.

Half the globe away your siren songs had long been sung.

You were gone decades ago

and now I have the hands of an old man

with a face that almost matches.

This time around we got out of step.

Mistiming, loneliness are the lessons we lived this life to learn.

Like the revised poem last post, this poem too has gained punctuation and lost some words. It reads better now. It is I think complete. 

Here's the Ezra Collective, get dancing.

Until next time.