The programme outlined a new theory regarding the phenomena in Ireland. It proposed that such deaths are ritual sacrifices to appease the Gods at times of famine following climate change. The fact that the individual has been hit on the head, straggled and had their throat cut fits with the ancient concept of the threefold death. There are Irish records relating to kings being killed in this manner.
Seamus Heaney wrote about the bog bodies in his collection North [1975] and did a better job than I could ever hope to do. Here, however, is my take.
The Threefold Death of Kings
Place
this foot in front of the other.
One
step nearer.
Feel
the wet marsh,
the
cold water,
dirt
on your feet.
Taste
the air, dry mouthed.
Eyes
telescope,
fix
on inconsequential detail.
Place
your next foot down,
take
it all in:
the
wet, grey marsh,
the
grey, lightening sky,
the
bronze sword,
always
the bronze sword.
This
is the longest walk of your life,
this
is the last walk of your life.
I
am a dead man.
Memory
cascades.
It
would be no consolation to tell you
that
your death will inspire better poets than me,
or
that after sleeping the centuries,
we
shall know so much about you,
save
your name.
The
bronze sword cuts the flesh
of
the arm you meant not to raise.
Then
on your knees, airway ligatured,
you
choke at the bottom of an ocean of atmosphere,
are
struck on the head and are cast into the bog.
The
changing weather pattern
requires
desperate action.
The
tribe is starving,
who
knows their future.
As usual, I wonder if it is complete and offer it as a work in progress.
Here is something far lighter. I was attempting to capture a fleeting memory from the 70's.
back in the day
when
pubs closed at two o'clock
every
Sunday
I
was buying cigarettes and Rizzlas
a
dead give away
don't
get too stoned the barmaid advised
I
didn't know what to say
it's
a different world now
I've
swapped smoking for tea making
if
you get my drift
For the uninitiated Rizzla's are a make of cigarette papers. In those days I preferred Job papers myself.
I am ending with Hurray For The Riff Raff singing I Know It's Wrong.
The 'Kings' is simply a stunning poem Paul. I've read it several times and the imagery just hooks you straight into the scene. To be honest I think it stands exactly as it is. Nice work :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Paul. I've been working on it on and off for about two months. If I am honest I was standing too near, your kind words are very welcome.
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