Or workshop 7.
I recently ran a workshop for Juncture 25 and based it on an idea by Tony Williams that had been published by The Guardian. Essentially the idea was to write a poem from the perspective of a commodity.
I recently ran a workshop for Juncture 25 and based it on an idea by Tony Williams that had been published by The Guardian. Essentially the idea was to write a poem from the perspective of a commodity.
The first idea I had was this:
Modern Farming Methods
The
land endures.
You
cannot own it but we believe do,
are
willing to die for this illusion.
But
look at the results of our husbandry;
speed
freak intensive production,
cranked
up Dr. Feelgood farming.
If
this field was a man
he'd
be stick thin, with rotting teeth,
and
dark circles under each vague eye,
lined
up with the methadone brigade,
waiting
for that sticky, sweet dollop of grace
that
each morning brings.
I was thinking of how intensive farming has depleted the land how it is dependent on the chemicals we add.
This second attempt was about the forced harvesting of organs from prisoners.
eyesight
to the blind
Each
has it's price.
Worth
more than this captive life,
which
is stamped and set for execution.
Once
the deals are done,
and
the logistics of modern medicine
have
arrived at an optimum date,
a
harvest festival of human organs.
We
shall give thanks,
but
not enquire too closely
how
they have come here.
Pretty desperate stuff eh? Hopefully next post will be a little lighter...
Here's Brooke Sharkey and Adam Beattie.
I love the title. The first thought in my head is the wonderful song by Aretha Franklin, which had a lovely sensuality to it. Then the poem reminds me of an old Native American custom (for some tribes I should say). Some native peoples of America had the view that you could never own land. If you couldn't pick it up and take it with you...you didn't own it. Great job idea for a workshop. Cheers!
ReplyDeleteAretha is a wonderful singer. I had not heard the particular custom you mention but I was thinking of the different way First People regard the land. I have to agree with them, you can't own the land. Glad you liked the poem:)
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