At times you have to remove your favourite line from a poem for it to work. This is difficult as you are in love with it. You must be ruthless. I have a collection of such lines that I hope will come in useful at some unspecified point in the future.
This first poem came out of a conversation about cuts to the Disabled Students Allowance that our wonderful new government is bringing in this year. They refuse to see dyslexia as a disability.
only forty four with all his life behind him
This first poem came out of a conversation about cuts to the Disabled Students Allowance that our wonderful new government is bringing in this year. They refuse to see dyslexia as a disability.
She trots out all the famous examples,
the
people who got on regardless.
Pluck
and determination, that's the ticket.
Implicit
in her philosophy
is
that the ones who struggle, those who fail,
are
lazy, shirkers, wanting something for nothing.
I
reply people are all different.
Some
need more help.
It
could have been me,
it
could have been you.
She
counters with:
I
had no support at university!
I
had to get on with it!
Then
urges me to think of the cost
that
supporting dyslexic students adds to our tax bills.
I
talk of level playing fields,
equality
of access.
She
tuts and shakes her head,
regards
me as a museum piece.
She
knows she is right.
Thatcher's
child only concerned with me, me, me.
There was a further [short] stanza that began with my favourite line but it would have weakened the poem.
earthquakes
in his head
seismographs
show the damage
those
blue eyes see elsewhere
here
he whispers
something
about sugar
and
horses brought by his brother
certain
music sparks neural pathways
sets
him singing
a
fine tenor
only forty four with all his life behind him
I am not going to talk about this poem. I think it explains itself.
Here are the Mountain Goats with The Legend of Chavo Guerrero off their latest album Beat The Champ.
Fabulous, Paul
ReplyDeleteThanks Paul.
DeleteThey are both based on real occurrences as I said.
Glad you like them.