I was just reminded of a Little Feat song, Two Trains, which must have subconsciously influenced this post's poem.
Things like this happen all the time. We draw inspiration from all that is around us.
Here is Little Feat with said song.
And here they are in all their live glory.
Superb stuff.
Things like this happen all the time. We draw inspiration from all that is around us.
Early
on our temporary parallel path
she
gifted the key to understanding.
It
was nothing special,
a
pressured, bad decision
with
domino consequences falling.
She
had hers.
I
had mine.
Two
trains travelling in opposite lines,
alternate
endings wait in the wings.
The
difference was this:
I
kept my own counsel.
She
saw nothing remarkable in me.
I
sped away onwards towards today.
I have to confess I had to look up, just now, if it was onwards or onward- Paul and Jinny I need your grammar skills now!Here is Little Feat with said song.
Leave out onwards altogether ...'I sped away towards today' has a much more lyrical feel and I'm assuming you mean 'counsel' ;) .... excellent little poem ... we must hook up again soon
ReplyDeletePerceptive as always. Thank you Paul.
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