I was working on the allotment the other day, watering in the polytunnel, and that old blues song about never missing your water until the well runs dry came into my head. Over the rest of the after noon this poem wrote itself.
I tend to write more in my head these days. To get the poem into some shape before I write anything down. I don't think it's a better way of working just different.
Here is Peter Tosh with his version.
Something
Else
He
carried water to the well.
The
yoke was heavy,
the
water angry enough to slop.
That
none had asked him to,
was
for him, beside the point.
He
may have claimed
it
was for the general good,
or
Phariseed his pious intention.
There
was an unquenched fury
in
his every step.
Some
people live their whole lives like that.
I think as it formed that I was trying to capture the essence of passive aggression. I tend to write more in my head these days. To get the poem into some shape before I write anything down. I don't think it's a better way of working just different.
Here is Peter Tosh with his version.
I enjoyed reading your poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.
Thanks Andrew, much appreciated
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