Honestly I got the first line and the rest wrote itself. It was one of those poems that live in my head for a couple of days before being written down. I always write out drafts longhand. It helps me to get the feel of the poem. Rarely do I compose on the keyboard.
When I'm rewriting the poem I always refer the the original draft as I think that helps to keep me from drifting, or diluting the essence of the poem.
On the road to Jericho
we bitched about the gig,
hunted out mouthpieces
long unused and dusty.
On the road to Jericho
we raked over old grudges,
squabbled about the set list.
Unspoken fears every step of the way.
By the second tune
we knew the notes to play,
the size of the walls no longer mattered.
That last day, the seventh,
almost made the previous forty years make sense.
The only line I am unsure about is the last line of the second stanza. I'm not sure that it works.
Next year will be ten years of Magpie Bridge! It doesn't seem that long. I shall be unveiling some surprises as the year unfolds.
I have been listening to Leyla McCalla a lot recently. I was first attracted by her recordings of Langston Hughes' poetry- superb.Here's Money is King from her latest album The Capitalist Blues.
Here's Heart of Gold, the lyrics are taken from a poem by Mr. Hughes. Until next time.
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