I guess you know
this is a fear of poetry. I suspect if you read this blog on anything like a
regular basis you are not afflicted by such a fear.
A number of poems about the moon today. I have had the first line of this one knocking around my head for some time.
6am searchlight moon
illuminates the rooftops
early morning yawn
spark the car to more
life than me
drive into the dawn
the atmospheric lens of
night
magnifies the rising red
moon
nearer – further
we play motorway tag
until the street lights
drown the stars
I think it is a work in progress, what do you think?
This next one is a companion piece and wrote itself quite quickly.
washed out white disc
already worn away
shaving of soap
in the basin of the
stars
I thought of
distilling it onto a haiku but I rather like the way it sits on the page.
The last poem is rather different, a little sombre and definitely not complete. I feel that it needs to go somewhere. There is time for it to fully form itself.
we are in trouble
but there will be no
rescue
we only have each other
so throw away the
ideology
twentieth century
thinking won’t save us
the problem is nearer
than the next election
deeper than the budget deficit
we cannot go on like
this
There is a fine line between describing a situation and hectoring people.
I am going to leave you with some music. This is Pentangle live.
Pentangle. Now there's a blast from my past. Agree about 2nd poem. I like the two 'w's and the ''shaving of soap in the basin of the stars'' ...the two ''thes'' give it a rhythm.But hey, I'm not a poet.
ReplyDeleteI think you have the soul of a poet- thank you.
ReplyDeleteYes, Pentangle-what a good band they were. never saw them though-did you?