I was told recently that poems about birds are out of fashion, before this it was the word shard. I am not sure who decides such things, certainly they do not matter.
Here is a poem that mentions herons. It is far from finished, but I think it works in its own way.
I'd be interested in your opinions. I know what I think the poem is about but you may have different ideas.
I leave you with a song from 1980. I used to have the single.
Here is a poem that mentions herons. It is far from finished, but I think it works in its own way.
Four
herons pick over the bones,
clack
and caw to reach a decision.
The
city is their backdrop.
Sunlight
gilds the water.
The
herons have set themselves a task,
to
sieve the river from end to end.
They
argue. This one complains:
I
am no pelican, gimlet of eye
With
a shovel bill and appetite to match.
Another
talks technique,
the
proper motion for investigation,
the
beak must rise and fall, rise and fall.
A
third interrupts attempts to compare the action
to
a sewing machine’s needle tip,
glimpsed
once through a window,
but
language fails, then there is argument.
Crepuscule
stains the surface blood…
This
is how to sift a river:
start
at the mouth, as if French kissing,
note
how the current probes back.
As
you move up stream
silt
may stain, smooth pebble chip tooth.
Gold
may gather on your tongue.
Whatever
they say,
whatever
is promised,
this
is a misfortune.
Once
the gold has
been possessed,
the
water strip searched
it’s
bed disturbed and left unmade,
there
will be nothing.
You
cannot now tell the herons apart,
they
are a jumble of feather and bone.
The
city has been put to the sword.
Oh
yes, someone is the richer,
but
not you, not yours.
We
few that remain,
plum
the dirty stream for anything.
I'd be interested in your opinions. I know what I think the poem is about but you may have different ideas.
I leave you with a song from 1980. I used to have the single.
OK, so I see the herons as archetypes of people who are intent on destroying others for their own satisfaction, or maybe a principle they hold. Maybe they are politicians, maybe bankers/captains of industry. Interestingly, herons are protected, so you are not allowed to kill one. Similarly, so many of these corrupt people seem to be protected by laws, money, etc and can destroy at will and get away with it. I thought the poem was extremely powerful, both in the use of individual words and imagery
ReplyDeleteThank you H_cat. I appreciate your perceptive comments. I was attempting to convey something of what you say, that those who we protect may not in the end prove beneficial to us as a society. Glad it chimed with you.
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