Two thirds of this poem came in a rush and the skill was to make the last part work. There have been many drafts and there may be more to come.
Startled
finger prints are the best to lift
off
cup, door handle, another's flesh.
The
ones that did not expect to be called to account,
are open, honest, and convey a simple story.
Premeditating
hands will wish to smear their natural oils
and
sweat incomplete or twisted impressions.
They
pray to be incomprehensible.
They
pray for no detection after the event.
There
can be no time for remorse,
if
the novels and films are to be believed.
Every
surface must be wiped in reverse order,
reflection
on the action comes later, if at all.
This
is the myth of science they peddle,
all
knowing experts reading a room,
a
mind, a life, this world,
then
telling us God is dead
or
was absent in the first place.
How
little they know.
As usual I am title less. Any suggestions?I'm off to see The Mountain Goats in two weeks and I can't wait. Here John Darnielle playing solo.
I love it. As a person who believes in God, I love this poem. It's very spiritual. I also like the picture. I'm not sure what that is. It looks skeletal.
ReplyDeleteThank you Msmariah. It's good to hear your kind comments.
DeleteThe photograph is a fossil, an ammonite. You can find them on Kilve Beach here in Somerset, there are always lots of them in the rocks.