Recently we have started to have our milk delivered in milk bottles just like we used to have in the olden days. Last weekend we were away and decided to put the milk bottles into the freezer. This first prose poem explains why you cannot do that.
It's one of those poems which are inspired by an image but that do not transcend their connection to that image.
I occasionally will use an image to provoke a poem. It can be an effective workshop prompt. However the words usually need to be supported by the image, as in this case.
Since I returned from Barcelona I've been listening to a lot of Leonard Cohen. Here he is singing Famous Blue Raincoat, the picture quality isn't brilliant but the music!
Until next time.
I did not realise you cannot
freeze milk in a bottle because milk is at least 85% water which
expands as it freezes cracking the glass and pushing off the foil top
in a frozen explosion
It's one of those poems which are inspired by an image but that do not transcend their connection to that image.
I occasionally will use an image to provoke a poem. It can be an effective workshop prompt. However the words usually need to be supported by the image, as in this case.
Sheila’s Poem
1.12.18.
as
brittle as bone china
ever
more fragile
she
tells me what she sees
it
is not my reality
I
welcome her words
attempt
to see her reality
I’ve
known her half my lifetime
so
I can follow the clues
gently
we talk
until
head bowed seamlessly
she
slips into sleep
and
the magazine falls from her
hand
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