Another revised poem. Thanks again to The Secret Poets for their invaluable assistance. You can read the last version here.
When I showed the poem to the Secrets there was some confusion over what a wet job was [Mafia jargon for a murder]. As I always want a poem to be accessible all the abstruse slang had to go.
Here's Horslips. They were a great live band though I only saw them once.
And here they are from 1976.
Until next time.
Hit Man
He
sleeps inside your memory until
someone
mentions labyrinth or Minotaur
and
asks what was the name of that bloke
The
one with the thread and sword?
We
tend to forget how keen was the edge,
his
primary problem solving strategy.
I
wonder if he’d not been better off staying in that cave,
missed
out on the mixed reviews
that
followed from him ditching the woman
who’d
given him the string and sword.
Pimped
her out to Apollo
and
high tailed it back to Athens,
those
black sails prompting his father’s suicide
and
his son’s swift ascension to the top.
Yes,
he’d rather we forgot the messy details
and
just remember him for that first hit.
When I showed the poem to the Secrets there was some confusion over what a wet job was [Mafia jargon for a murder]. As I always want a poem to be accessible all the abstruse slang had to go.
Here's Horslips. They were a great live band though I only saw them once.
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