I have a good beginning for a poem but the end is vexatious. It almost feels like I've tacked it on from another poem. Some poem's are slow to reveal themselves.
a starveling thesaurus
mugged me on dream street
stole my vocabulary
speechless
I mimed the night away
in the dawn’s cold light
my whispered words
pebbles in my mouth
I've been playing around with it for the last two weeks. I think it is time for it to go away for a while. This next one attempts to capture those brief moments of insight.
just like that
he finally got it
perceived the interconnections
rolling down the predawn road
he finally got it
near enough words
poured from his mouth
they’d have to do for now
stopped at the lights
he repeats them
merging with the traffic
he speaks every one
so he finally arrives
writes down his litany
the mouth worn words
offer no point of entry
if he had it
it has gone
Actually it is pretty much as it happened. I was driving to Plymouth and for a split second everything fitted together- then as quickly, it was gone.
I am missing meeting with the Secret Poets. I feel I need their perspective on some of my recent work. Watch this space.
Here's Paul Simon with The Obvious Child. I had forgotten what a good song this was. Although lyrically it is not quite as sharp as the Hearts & Bones album.
Until next time.
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