THEFT
On more than one occasion
I have taken a conversation
because it was there
attractive words hung in the air
and cast them in ink on a page
I was discussing the next poem with a friend recently and I was prompted to add a line. You can read the last version here.INNER SPACE
He took up mirrors
reflected on his reflection
Blanket wrapped the hours pass
gazing at his likeness
He is his own space telescope
the universe before him
And each eye a new world
to be examined in turn
One then the other
this is one then that
Consumed by more than silence
he floats untethered
Ever diminishing
I'm still not certain about this poem. Does it stand alone without the reader needing any extra knowledge? I think it needs to go away for a time.
Maya De Vitry is touring at the moment. Here she is from earlier this year.
Until next time.




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