As we stood admiring the jam sponges we got to talking about how they are selected. Neither of us knowing anything about the judging of cakes. So we decided that this would be a good subject to write a poem about.
I spent part of the afternoon writing a list of words and phrases which I thought might make it into the poem or at least be a starting point.
The next day I wrote this:
The
Song of the Sponge Cake Judge
This
morning I ate no breakfast
for
the task requires a certain hunger
and
must be approached with respect.
Half
can be discarded on first glance,
for
perfection is exacting.
Never
forget this is science not art.
Television
has a lot to answer for,
it
creates lazy illusions.
If
it were that easy,
everyone
could do it.
The list of words gave me the voice for the character. I wanted someone who did not subscribe to the idea that cookery is art.I think the poem could be about there, but it will go away for a couple of months now.
Here is Sufyan Stevens.
Until next time.
Excellent poem! And you beat me to it ... mine's still cooking at the moment :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Paul, and thanks again for your help with the judging.
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