Thanks must go to the Secret Poets for their help with revising this poem.
You can read the original here.
I was unhappy with the final line and when we were discussing the poem as a whole Fanon's book The Wretched of The Earth nominated itself as a better ending.
Thanks chaps.
TURN
of THE COAT
I'm
late for work, but it doesn't matter
as
it's the early 70's
and
I'm a member of the labour aristocracy,
top
of the pile, an indentured tradesman.
So
I stop at the paper shop,
and
on a whim, buy the Financial Times.
A
thick, pink window on an alien world.
Tea
break, in the baggin' room,
the
shop steward,
full
to the brim with us and them,
tells
me:
This
is not our paper,
this
is for them with the money.
Why
are you, a working man,
buying
the bosses paper?
Curiosity,
I reply.
Just
looking beyond the tools
at
how other people live.
He
shakes his head, tuts.
A
very public sound
-turns,
walks away.
By
the end of that decade,
he
will have emigrated to South Africa,
claiming
that Britain is done for.
He
wants to taste the good life,
to
bring up his kids somewhere with a future.
I
will be an undergraduate,
reading
The Wretched of The Earth.
Those of you who follow this blog will know of my championing of Ryley Walker.Here is a short film about him.
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