A simple poem to start.
This is a true story. Me and my sister went to change the flowers on the family plot in February and the vases and Christmas flowers had been stolen.
I'm not sure about the poem, but I like the starkness of the telling.
This next one is all fiction. It wrote itself over a couple of weeks but the form eluded me until I hit upon the prose poem layout.
The phrase to fly one's kite is an old saying means to have a good time. It seemed to suit to the poem.
Here's Anna Ternheim.
Until next time.
The Family Plot
low
sky
lazy
wind
February
10
o’clock Tuesday in Widnes
is
as grey as those words sound
we
bring bright plastic flowers
for
this grave without a headstone
someone
has stolen the vases
and
red Christmas bouquets
that
we had put on before
This is a true story. Me and my sister went to change the flowers on the family plot in February and the vases and Christmas flowers had been stolen.
I'm not sure about the poem, but I like the starkness of the telling.
This next one is all fiction. It wrote itself over a couple of weeks but the form eluded me until I hit upon the prose poem layout.
casual crimson
the three billion cells that collectively composed his person
suspected this new red shirt is the business
as
he walks the town to divine the best spot to be seen in
the
rain has other ideas and forces his feet into the nearest sports bar
to
sip blood warm beer and stare at real life on the big screen
there
is nothing else
he
will not get to fly his kite heavier as it is than the wet air
wisdom
descends and he knows why his shirt was so reasonably priced
the
fabric’s dye had stained his skin a deep crimson
and
then he knows in his bones that the outcome of this night will
replicate itself across all his weekends
and
that it welcomes him into the kind of life he never imagined would be
his
The phrase to fly one's kite is an old saying means to have a good time. It seemed to suit to the poem.
Here's Anna Ternheim.
Not actually a simple poem....Love it, particularly the awkwardness of the last line..."that we had put on before" like the sorrow held back, like somehow going back to an earlier time of linear simplicity. Always a great fan Paul. Oscar x
ReplyDeleteThanks Oscar
DeleteI value your opinion greatly.
I thought the poem needed to be simple and direct, otherwise it would be tell and not show.
Are you still writing? We must meet up and talk xx